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		<description><![CDATA[I am currently taking a class that focuses on the teaching and workshopping of writing in the classroom. Of course, there emphasis on technique, process, crafting, etc&#8230;..
Reading is foundational to good writing.  Thinking on this, and hearing other writers in class, I wonder: Is it OK to write in the style of Hemingway or [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=sushi1214.wordpress.com&blog=1984925&post=12&subd=sushi1214&ref=&feed=1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>I am currently taking a class that focuses on the teaching and workshopping of writing in the classroom. Of course, there emphasis on technique, process, crafting, etc&#8230;..</p>
<p>Reading is foundational to good writing.  Thinking on this, and hearing other writers in class, I wonder: Is it OK to write in the style of Hemingway or Sandra Cisneros?-short, concise, not possessing flowering language and extreme imagery.  Yes, I think there can be such a thing as &#8220;extreme&#8221; imagery.  Take a peek at the book, <em>The Raw Shark Texts</em>.  Um, I&#8217;ll let you decide for yourself, but I couldn&#8217;t make it past the first chapter.  I do, however, appreciate its inventiveness.</p>
<p>I have spent this past week reading Bonnie Friedman&#8217;s <em>Writing Past Dark:  Envy, Fear, Distraction, and Other Dilemmas in</em> <em>the Writer&#8217;s Life.</em>  Friedman paints some glorious images and dead-on metaphors for the ideas she tries to convey.  I find myself stopping every couple of pages just to absorb the painted words. Wow!  It&#8217;s nonfiction written in lush prose.  Even though I find this writing stunning, I have no desire to write in this &#8220;elongated&#8221; fashion even though it creates an almost communal experience between the reader and the words on the page.</p>
<p>Is there anything wrong with &#8220;austere word choice&#8221; and &#8220;unvarnished descriptions&#8221;???  I guess it&#8217;s all about the little thing we writers call &#8220;voice,&#8221; when we all actually have many voices.  And, no, we don&#8217;t need to find the voice because it&#8217;s been there all along&#8230;&#8230;..  It&#8217;s just that when I&#8217;m in class w/ me peers and write, following a prompt, and then share in class.  I either feel like my piece is much more sparse (and I like it that way); I feel pressured to create, or attempt to, a vividly detailed, lush, and clever metaphor.  I feel like this is the expected norm in writing-for prose, anyway.  Hmmm&#8230;..</p>
<p>Perhaps I am realizing that it&#8217;s Ok that my voice doesn&#8217;t necessarily sing in tune with others-kind of like the penguin in <em>Happy Feet</em> who is booted out because his voice isn&#8217;t what it supposed to be and he, therefore, finds a rhythm all of his own.</p>
<p>I warned you about ramblings, right??</p>
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